MikeH,
In my opinion more verbiage is better. I know the axiom - a picture is worth a thousand words. But, words can be used to paint a beautiful picture. Reading a detailed description of an event draws me into the experience.
I reread the post - even though I remember reading it when you first posted it on the Yahoo site. Good narrative.
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Dale
Huntsville, AL
2 x 2005 - Hers & His
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